my sentence is below: As we’ve explained above that round bar(including both of metal and carbon material) has a helical cut on the surface that uses to determine the beauty value.
Should I utilize uses or using in this context?
4
-
Your sentence makes no sense to me at all. Can you add an explanation of what you mean to ask?– DavoCommented Mar 30, 2019 at 12:44
-
@DavoI there is a helical cut on the round bar, the helical cut is used to determine the beauty value of that round bar. I am trying to translate it from Chinese to English for practicing in English translation learning.– Fresh LearnerCommented Mar 30, 2019 at 12:57
-
I don't understand what "beauty value" is - is this like "quality"? If so, Michael Harvey's answer below is good.– DavoCommented Mar 30, 2019 at 13:36
-
@Davo Yes, it is like "quality", thank you all the same^_^– Fresh LearnerCommented Mar 30, 2019 at 13:52
Add a comment
|
1 Answer
Neither. Possibly "As we’ve explained above, that round carbon and metal bar has a helical cut on the surface that is used to determine the beauty value."
answered Mar 30, 2019 at 12:43
